Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Critical Evaluative Book Review

For the past two weeks, or rather 4 days of the past two weeks, I've been working on a Critical Evaluative Book Review for my advanced comp. class. The goal was to move beyond the typical summary book reviews we wrote when we were younger (not that I wrote many myself). I said 4 days because I tend to write my entire paper on Monday afternoon and Tuesday mornings before assignments are due by 9:30 am. Tuesday. This assignment took two weeks because of it's length, but I still only wrote half one Monday and the other have yesterday and this morning. Anyway, as always, I'd love comments, positive and critical. Yes I know, lots of people don't like to give critical or negative feedback for fear of hurting feelings, but as many of you know, I am not one to get easily offended (I will become a better writer too). =) More than anything though, I hope it brings you pleasure and doesn't put you to sleep. =)

Total words all together: 1670

Little Women

Louisa May Alcott

1880


Little Women

 

Louisa May Alcott, author of the inspirational and thrilling novel Little Women, engages women, young and old, in the exciting, special, and, at times, challenging adventures of maturing into womanhood found throughout the applicable messages in her writing. Father March, away in the Civil War, leaves four sisters struggling in their poverty, passions, and trials, with a confidant mother to take troubles to. Mrs. March leads, encourages, and challenges each of her daughters to face their difficulties and overcome every hardship in life. Differing widely, each girl merges into the youth and beauty of womanhood and faces her own characteristic challenges; vanity, pride, sharp tongue, and quick temper. Though far away from his family in Concord Massachusetts, Mr. March, maintains his proper place as head of the March household, the stake upon which the whole family revolves, and to whom all of the March ladies look up to and vehemently desire to please.

Margaret, the eldest of the four sisters, starts out longing for finery and grand clothes, but honestly thrives on love and kind words. Jo, the juvenile girl cannot abide ladylike manners, and her quick temper and love of jolly fun often cause trouble in her youth until she finds womanhood truly is a virtue. Quiet, introverted Beth prefers to stay at home and though she appears nearly perfect, she is the most conscious of her mistakes and failures. Self-centered, artistic Amy prefers spending her time shaping her nose, which does not have the Grecian air she wishes, than her character, but she later learns the importance of virtuous character.  At the beginning of the novel, the March’s have very few acquaintances due partially to their poverty. Before long however, bold, tomboyish Jo has met the rich and supposed miserly reclusive grandfather next door and his young prankish grandson. Growing over several years, this family friendship helps burst the buds of childishness into blossoms of young adulthood.

With the focus of entertaining her audience, Alcott writes from her heart about what she knows and partially from what she wishes reality would have bestowed upon her family. Between Jo getting into scrapes by toying with rash experiments, Laurie’s slang expressions, Meg’s idealistic plans of marrying rich, and Amy’s desire to be a “fine lady,” the reader cannot help but enjoy the larks and romps of the spry young characters. Intending to provide the reader with light and yet moral literature, Alcott’s characters subliminally teach ideas and concepts to the viewer. Following their adventures one may find herself desiring fine clothes and a husband with money along with Meg, yet by the time the young character has “sat in the lap of luxury” with her experience at Vanity Fair, the reader will soon realize that money does not fix everything. Mrs. March’s words of wisdom teach her daughters, “I am ambitious for you, but not to make a dash in the world - marry rich men merely because they are rich, or have splendid houses, which are not homes because love wanting.” (99) Money has a useful purpose, but it should not be the driving factor for love. This simple and yet neglected proverb is only one of the many valuable lessons Alcott teachers her readers while at the same time entertaining them.

Little Women portrays the general them of man versus self and the specific theme of concurring faults. Throughout the novel, Alcott’s characters find themselves in rough places and struggling to get out of problematic situations. However, the characters all act as mirrors for each other reflecting their attributes, but more importantly, their shortcomings. Qualities one person may lack, another character possesses and thus they confide in one another and learn their faults and how to correct them. Jo finds bridling her tongue quite the challenge. After it cost her a long awaited trip to Europe, she goes to her mother and confesses, “oh, my tongue, my abominable tongue! Why can’t I learn to keep it quiet?” (301) Conflicts arise internally for these characters and not amongst each other; for these sisters are the best and dearest of friends. They begin to see themselves through someone else’s eyes and thus learn how to remodel their character.

Alcott’s style of writing moves mostly through dialogue with the help of some narration. Page after page of Little Women has varied sentence length, strong diction, and humor such as when Amy says uses the work Cyclops instead of centaur and lapse of lingy instead of lapsus linguae. Words unfamiliar to readers provide a good opportunity to increase one’s vocabulary by looking up new expressions. Some of the characters in the book speak a language other than English and Alcott does not shy away from using phrases and sentences in their native tongue to help emphasize the role. Writing clearly with lots of description can present challenges, but Alcott has both talent and imagination needed. Descriptions in Alcott’s novel allow the reader to travel into the book as a family friend and enjoy the day at Camp Laurence, taste Jo’s dinner party flop, feel both the pain and joy of Beth’s departure, and the love Meg feels towards her children. Main characters are described much more than the minor characters because the development of the prominent actors is more important than those less involved.

Whether young or old, any woman would love reading Little Women. By the time a young lady can handle the length and vocabulary of the book, she will devour the pages of this literary treasure. Women who have experienced more of life than others, enjoy reflecting on life and would relish seeing the lives of these four young ladies as they branch into womanhood. Differing from books which portray a utopian view of life, one tool Alcott uses well, is incorporating conflict and trial. This reflects human lives as well because humans cannot obtain perfection and thus we cannot relate to a fanciful life as we can to a life of struggles.

Though Little Women portrays a very moral view of living for the March family and surrounding characters, the morality does not come from a desire to obey God. Ideas of modesty, refraining from affection until after marriage, speaking with clean language, and common courtesy and respect flow throughout the novel, but simply because Alcott lived during a time in which people led moral lives regardless of religion. God does not play a prominent role in the lives of the young ladies, and one of the few times they mention Him is in a time of sorrow when Beth, deathly ill with scarlet fever, lay in the balance between life and death, Meg states an agreement for God saying, “if God spares Beth, I never will complain again.” (186) Jo makes a similar bargain when she says, “if God spares Beth, I’ll try to love and serve Him all my life.” (186) Few Biblical principals pop up within the pages of adventures, but only in times of trial as if God existed only for present relief in difficult times and not as Father and Savior. Their sense of morality, right, and wrong, comes from the culture around them and not from the Bible or God.

Concealed throughout the novel Alcott weaves hidden thoughts into her book giving the impression that haughtiness, condescension, and arrogance accompany riches and wealth. With the exception of the Laurences, the other wealthy people in the town around the Marchs hold an air of self-importance unbecoming and dishonorable to any class of people. Upper class citizens of the area look down upon young women who hire themselves out as governesses as Meg does. European friends who visit Laurie are illustrated as dishonest people and the government of France is condemned giving the impression that Alcott perhaps used these people and situations to relate her dislike of Europeans. Overall, the book does not represent a strong prejudice against certain races, but merely a dislike for common characteristics or qualities she saw in people which she disliked.

Although Little Women’s focus is on the young March’s, Alcott portrayed Jo as the main protagonist with mother, sisters, and best friend Laurie as round characters to provide depth. Readers begin seeing other characters through Jo’s eyes. Without Mrs. March as confidant, the girls would not know where to turn in trouble and the whole story would not hold much interest without Marmee’s moral suggestions and encouragements. For a time, Mr. John Brook plays antagonist in Jo’s mind as she realizes the possibility of him marrying Meg of whom she says, “I just wish I could marry Meg myself, and keep her safe in the family.” (199) Throughout the book, Laurie and Jo have an existential relationship between them. Nearly everyone expects that they love each other from the beginning and will soon be wed in matrimony; however, Jo’s rejection befuddles her readers adding excitement to the novel.             

Different aspects of Alcott’s book could categorize this piece of literature as fiction, romance, or drama. Dramatic scenes such as Amy nearly drowning in the river or Jo searing Meg’s hair might cause this novel to take a stand with dramatic literature. Perhaps the love stories of Meg, Jo, and Amy would place the book with romances. However the real genre that plays over and over is simple fiction. Alcott wrote from her heart; partially from her life and partially from what she desired her life could have held. Nonetheless, she wrote a classic piece of fiction literature that will forever impact the lives and hearts of women through its drama, romance, and fiction.

Little Women illustrates a beautiful picture of young women struggling through situations as every girl does. However, Alcott does not leave her actors in faults without bringing them through to the other side. Each sister experiences triumph over failure. Every woman would enjoy reading this novel because of the moral concepts and valuable lessons taught without preachy sermons. Alcott’s literary masterpiece has left a print on the hearts of many ladies that they will not soon forget.

 

Thursday, March 19, 2009

happy first day of spring!

The first day of spring is one thing, and the first spring day is another. The difference between them is sometimes as great as a month. -Henry Van Dyke

It was one of those March days when the sun shines hot and the wind blows cold: when it is summer in the light, and winter in the shade. -Charles Dickens



megalomania- obsession with the excessive of power, especially in the domination of others

saturnine- (of a person or their manner) slow and gloomy

torpid- mentally or physically inactive

inert- lacking the ability or strength to move

mollify- appease the anger or anxiety of (someone)

cavalier- showing a lack of proper concern

efface- to erase (a mark) from a surface

Friday, March 13, 2009

Give a homeschooler a hands-on science project and...

...she'll need a pair of goggles and gloves to go with it. This is what happens when Marissa is left at home with her (also crazy) sister to dissect a formaldehyde-soaked specimen. =D

Good-morning snow


This morning we work up to a dark, cloudy day, promising the forecasted snow. Not being one to typically enjoy the cold, wet moisture, especially when longing for spring, I begrudgingly started the day. However, as I looked out the window in my room, I could not help but stand in awe at the beautiful scene spread before me. During morning Bible study and  breakfast, the clouds had dispersed their flaky contents on the welcoming ground. The tall mountains invisible behind drooping clouds, evergreen trees heavy with moisture from rain and now dusted with glittering snow, and the feeling of a wintery day, spun my attitude around and determined me to have a wonderful, productive, and cheerful day in spite of the previously disagreeable clouds. Thus I pulled out my camera, bundled up, and went outside to feed the animals and capture the beautiful scene (which at this point has melted away). =) 










Tuesday, March 10, 2009

marginalia

"The great intellectual tradition that comes down to us from the past was never interrupted or lost through such trifles as the sack of Rome, the triumph of Attila, or all the barbarian invasions of the Dark Ages. It was lost after the introduction of printing, the discovery of America, the coming of the marvels of technology, the establishment of universal education, and all the enlightenment of the modern world. It was there, if anywhere, that there was lost or impatiently snapped the long thin delicate thread that had descended from distant antiquity; the thread of that unusual human hobby: the habit of thinking." G.K. Chesterton

innocuous- not harmful or offensive

escarpment- a long, steep slope especially one at the edge of a plateau or separating areas of land at different heights

concatenation- a series of interconnected things or events

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

What'd you do with Russell????

Yesterday, Russell had a very good afternoon and cheerfully helped and served to get dinner ready. Mark hadn't known that Momma changed the chore chart around a bit and ended up doing some of Russell's work; when Russell finished the rest of his work he willing jumped in to help Mark. Russell was quick to offer kinds words to everyone with a happy countenance. After asking Momma if there was anything she needed him to do, Momma surprised turned to him and said to him
"What'd you do with Russell?" and commented on how delightful it was when he was happy and willing to serve. Russell replied..
"I've turned him into a good boy!" =) 

Friday, February 27, 2009

Some favorites

Here are some of my favorite quotes that I wanted to share with you all. =)

~"Don't compromise your standards because you want to look your best; look your best by upholding your standards." ~A  Rebelutionary (quote from the Modesty Survey)

~" You have so many extraordinary gifts, you can't expect to lead an ordinary life." ~ Marmie (Little Women)

~"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."~ Unknown

~"Meekness before God is not weakness before men. In fact such meekness and humility before God is essential if any man is to be truly used by God."~ Douglas Wilson

~"No life ever grows great unless it is focused, dedicated, and disciplined." ~ Unknown

~“I am only one, but I am one. I can not do everything but I can do something. What can I do, I should do and, with the help of God, I will do!” ~Everett Hale

~"It is better for someone to think you to be a fool than you open your mouth and remove all doubt." ~Unknown


Hope you all enjoy quotes as much as I do. =) Have a wonderful weekend! 

Wednesday, February 25, 2009

leadership in action

Today I finished reading a book by Douglas Wilson called For Kirk and Covenant. (an excellent read for all you bookworms out there!) At the back of the book there is a list of attributes which the author suggests a leader must have/acquire. They were very thought provoking for me, so I thought others might like to read them. Here is a partial list:

1. a leader must know how to love
2. a leader revers the Lord of heaven
3. Courage is the testing point of all the virtues, and a leader must have it
4. strength of character in leadership is tempered with mercy
5. a leader must understand tenderness
6. people with gifts in leadership must also have the gift of humility
7. the one who would command obedience must himself be obedient
8. a leader is patient
9. a leader understands the importance of vision
10. a leader pours himself into his work
11. leadership begins in the home
12. a leader who loves what is right must know how to hate what is wrong
13. a leader must know how to communicate what he understands
14. a leader must understand and admit his faults and failings
15. a leader is a person who fills the call of greatness without becoming filled with himself

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Descriptions

Here are two descriptions I wrote for my English class this past week. I'd love comments. =)          


  Eclectic Three Year Old Dress Up           

 

Sandy brown feet, with pink painted toenails, stands spread apart in a very unladylike manner upon gray speckled carpet. Stout, bare legs springing up from the feet, suddenly disappear underneath a navy, maroon, and black striped cloth wrapped, folded, and twisted casually around a slender waist. One strip of caramel suede cloth dangles limply from the folds and twists of the dark striped material posing as a skirt. Upon the waist of the kilt-like garment, a small, young hand lies pressed against the waist as if to keep the unusual costume from falling away. This hand contrasts beautifully with its rich tones to the bleach white sleeve stopping just above the boney wrist. In the center of the worn knit turtleneck three printed grey wolves sit; two at the base with their snouts stuck in the folds of the skirt and the other sits proudly with head stretched upward howling at the impish face of a little girl about the age of three. 

 

Gently curved, a small white chin pops up from atop the tall turtleneck shirt and smoothly changes into sweetly rounded cheeks. Pink lips, slightly parted but not smiling, add the only color to the lower portion of the tranquil face and allow only three small, white baby teeth to show. Above her mouth a button nose sits gracefully. Dark brown eyes cavort and capture the attention away from any other feature and yet they add immensely to the roguish look of the child. Nut-brown eyebrows peak out under brunette bangs, which scatter her broad forehead. Finishing off her dress up, atop her straight brown crop, a slate and ebony ‘coon skin cap sits askew with a long, fake tail ringed in fawn and chestnut bands, drapes lifelessly over her sloping shoulder, resting its tip in a caressing hand.

Order: Vertical

 

 

Peace and Tranquility on Earth


Disrupting a curvy sidewalk, a four-foot high carved, pine gate opens out onto an outdoor living space as beautiful as a dream. Just beyond the gate, a coffee table for two, complete with a white and gray stone table and two wrought iron chairs with buff colored, cushioned footstools. Rising above the distant Santa Fe Mountains, the sun peaks over the jagged, blue-green range.  Turning clockwise, a fireplace engulfed in mortared stone, varying from deep rich browns to charcoal gray, stands straight and tall with chimney pointing to the sky. Orange and blue flames leap upward and the smell of cedar and pine drifts in the air to accompany the sound of sap crackling on the logs. Around the base of the fire, sheets of terracotta rock lay, never TIRE of providing a seat for relaxing visitors. Two large metal chairs stand with foot rests waiting to cushion the feet of any occupant. In between the two chairs sits an identical couch upon which a young lady with golden brown, curly hair lounges engulfed in a novel and enjoying an alfresco morning.

 

Beyond the fireplace and chairs, a tile counter extends elegantly spread with a pile of buttered waffles, slivers of smoked bacon, small pitchers of maple syrup and strawberry sauce, and a jug of orange juice. Reaching up toward the roof, a stone column graces the corner of the bar. Making a 90-degree angle, a grill and two stovetop burners ensconced on the counter. Below a miniature refrigerator stands read to chill any beverage. Six hefty chairs with a thatched iron back and chestnut upholstery dance around a table of similar dark stones and light tiles, enticing many to come relax in the soft seats. Nestled against the wall of the house, a bed of soil and mulch provide a home to six rose bushes beautifully displaying a variety of shape, color, and fragrance. Sliding, double doors of glass open wide into a kitchen. To the right of the entry, an alluring porch swing glides fluently in the benevolent breeze. Four slender, gold chains link up to hooks upon open rafters, which support the roof. Completing the circle brings the onlooker back to the wooden gate with four indented rectangles and a hollow flower pattern cut from the center of each.

Order: Circular 

Monday, February 23, 2009

marginalia

The fear of the Lord is the beginning of knowledge, but fools despise wisdom and instruction.
Proverbs 1:7

inveigh- to speak or write about something with hostility

lachrymose- tearful or given to weeping

prevaricate- to speak or act in an evasive way

provocation- action or speech that makes someone annoyed or angry esp. deliberately